Summary draft with thesis statement

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In the article “Smart Running Shoes: Will They Change The Way You Run?”, Lin (2017) discusses the functions and features of different versions of the Altra smart running shoes. In 2011, the first model of Altra IQ was introduced to the market. Sensors are incorporated in the soles of the shoes which can deliver “Real-time stride analysis”. The responses will then be relayed through smart devices such as "smart watches, phones, and earbuds". In 2017, engineers who invented the Altra smart shoes claimed that it was designed to not only record statistics but also “help runners avoid repetitive injuries” by tracking the user's "footfalls in real-time” via an app. An audio assistant prompts the user to rectify their movements to prevent injury. Finally, Lin (2017) asserts that the unique functions do not compromise the ergonomics of the shoes.

One of the main highlights of their shoe is the way it incorporates ‘real-time stride analysis’ technology into the running shoes to reduce risk of injuries occurring for the user. The ‘real-time stride analysis’ tracks the user movement per stride. This is done by installing a ‘razor-thin, multi-sensor system’ in the middle of the sole. From there, it will analyze the data and provide response to the user for them to correct their movement if any. According to businesswire website, this system is able to track a ‘range of running intelligence, such as foot strike zone.’ (Harper, 2016) mention that “this shoe is designed to help new runners avoid poor technique and make experienced runners more efficient when pounding the pavement.”

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Lin, N. (2017, 09 20). runsociety.com. Retrieved from Smart Running Shoes: Will They Change The Way You Run?: https://www.runsociety.com/opinions/smart-running-shoes-will-they-change-the-way-you-run/

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